Warrant: With a dramatic increase in shooting since its is important that we are aware of the increase and the steps that must be taken to lower it. Data with oral citation: A report done the FBI confirms a sharp in mass shooting since were, on average, 16 such shootings a year from 2007 to 2013, compared with an average of 6 shootings annually from to 5. In a study done through the US department of Education, has been estimated that each day in Chicago alone students carry guns to !! 4. Warrant: Not only are the parents purchasing these guns, but the students are as well. Data with oral citation: According to a study and report done the New York Times, largest surge in gun was in 2013, which happened to be at the height of school shooting in the 65 Million Gun Purchases Since Obama Took Office, More Than Total 3. Claim: America is facing an epidemic of gun purchases. ! Transition statement: The educational system is changing, and so is our nations gun control. And lastly being to educate our students at an early age about gun awareness and safety. First being aware of the increase in guns though out the united states, and the increase in school shootings, Second protecting out schools arming our teachers with firearms. Preview 3 main points: There are 3 major steps we need to take in order to dramatically decrease and eliminate school shooting although. Implementing gun safety courses in schools, and arming teachers to protect and educate is begin to become the new norm for the modern teacher. It should not only be the schools job to educate the students, but to protect them as well. Claim: Because of the increase in guns in America, there has been an increase in school shootings. It is these stories that have resulted due to a rise in gun sales, and lack of gun education safety throughout the United States. The story about the heroic teacher that steps in the way of the bullet, and saves her class. Credibility: Every time it seems we turn on the news, it seems there is always a story about a school shooting. On top of grades, teachers, roommate problems, the last thing we want to worry about is our safety. Relevance of Topic to this Audience: We are all going to school, and lets face it, we have a lot to worry about. No matter how old we are, or where we were raised the names of these schools, ring as loud as the bullets that flew through the school those tragic days. Attention Getter: We all know names, Columbine, NIU, the list goes on and on. Preview text Persuasive Outline Skeleton for Claim of Fact: (Topical) ! I.
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